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[The Wind Is Slow]

It's me again :)

Again the same key - F major :) Every song fom this album seems like variation of some theme. :) Very similar to the other works from this album.

Bak-R responds:

Hi you have right. I write every song of this album ( called : The Wind ) with the same key. ^^. I try to make different song, but with the same key. for the album stay in the same pitch ^^. but it's just the beggining ^^

[Blood, Bullets & Tears [SFPL]]

Some advices

Ok. What you will hear in a moment will be some advice. I know that you think this is really good music. But it isn't. The first thing is that you have created some harmony and it is going on and on. No changes. You add new instruments but the base is still the same. Like in techno. It starts from only base drum and it develops itself adding new things. Try to add something different, something surprising. It isn't complete because I can't hear a main motive. Harmony is not a motive. It is just base for melody. There is no characteristic melody. Think about that. 3/10 for idea.

SFaPiL2 responds:

I honestly didn't expect that, but that doesn't matter. This means that I was misjudgingly considering this song medium-good.

The funny thing is that in this version I was working on making it vary more... I guess I failed ^_^.

I will surely think about what you just said and will TRY (to the best of my capabilities) to fix this mistake.

Thank you for the honest advice.

[Remember The Hero]

Good

It's good for some background music or for the bullet time, when someone is falling down or dying. Nice job. I give you 8/10, because you need to develop yourself :) I think this is not the end of your abilities. Make your work better and better :) (For example try to make the piece longer, add more motives in one piece).

Enzer0 responds:

Yes sir! lol

[The Yellow Lounge]

A long way to the symphony :)

Chill out music :) But the brass was awful. It makes me sick :)

vai90 responds:

lol

[Thinking In Slow Motion]

Sory but boring

Beautiful but boring... Just everything the same. There's something missing. You need to add another motive cause it's only accomp... That's my opinion

SuperGoodSound responds:

mmkay. beautiful but boring? seems like a paradox to me.

[[MS] - Yellow Stain]

that's good

yeah this is good. the climate is great :)

Macsalad responds:

thanks dude - i like the climate, but i'd better put some more effort in beats like this one...