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[The Wind]

OK :)

F major :) Can you use some other key? It fits to some movie :) Try to make a one big song from the whole album and send it to some director. This is good for the intro :) Nice job :D

Bak-R responds:

My goal it's to make movie song ^^. Yes i can use other key. I will. ^^ don't be afraid. I just think it was a good idea to make an album with the same key. People could see that with the same key their is a lot of song.

I work of more song orchestral to learn a lot of new ability to compose several new song ^^.

Thanks for your comment. ;)

[The Wind Is Slow]

It's me again :)

Again the same key - F major :) Every song fom this album seems like variation of some theme. :) Very similar to the other works from this album.

Bak-R responds:

Hi you have right. I write every song of this album ( called : The Wind ) with the same key. ^^. I try to make different song, but with the same key. for the album stay in the same pitch ^^. but it's just the beggining ^^

[The Wind In Mt Heart]

Similar to...

To another work from this Album. The same key and similar chords. You are making "Theme with variations"? :)

[The Wind On You]

I like it

Very nice. It sounds like a song without words. Think about addind some text and singing. And definetly it's too short. I can imagine a man or woman riding a bicycle. :) Good work!

[Blood, Bullets & Tears [SFPL]]

Some advices

Ok. What you will hear in a moment will be some advice. I know that you think this is really good music. But it isn't. The first thing is that you have created some harmony and it is going on and on. No changes. You add new instruments but the base is still the same. Like in techno. It starts from only base drum and it develops itself adding new things. Try to add something different, something surprising. It isn't complete because I can't hear a main motive. Harmony is not a motive. It is just base for melody. There is no characteristic melody. Think about that. 3/10 for idea.

SFaPiL2 responds:

I honestly didn't expect that, but that doesn't matter. This means that I was misjudgingly considering this song medium-good.

The funny thing is that in this version I was working on making it vary more... I guess I failed ^_^.

I will surely think about what you just said and will TRY (to the best of my capabilities) to fix this mistake.

Thank you for the honest advice.

[Elements Of Sublimity]

Nice job

This song is the best example for building a strain. You develop this song to a culmination. I'm courios about what will be further. I'm giving you 8/10 because the drums in the end are awful. You need to learn how to keep a rythm. It's not equal and it's hard to listen to. Keep that in mind.

[Remember The Hero]

Good

It's good for some background music or for the bullet time, when someone is falling down or dying. Nice job. I give you 8/10, because you need to develop yourself :) I think this is not the end of your abilities. Make your work better and better :) (For example try to make the piece longer, add more motives in one piece).

Enzer0 responds:

Yes sir! lol

[Moments Musicaux, Impromptu #2]

Schubert :)

I give you 10/10 because it's Schubert and it sounds like on a carnival or something. Very funny interpretation. I like it :) Good work

[The Yellow Lounge]

A long way to the symphony :)

Chill out music :) But the brass was awful. It makes me sick :)

vai90 responds:

lol

[Metical - Revolution]

Good work!

It's very good, but (there's always "but") it will be better with some black man or woman singing and raping with some text about love or something that breaks heart. However i gives you 10/10 .