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[(WF1)Mysts of the unknown]

Very nice job here, but...

it's too repetitive! The beginning - it's marvelous! But then I feel something is missing and I know what is it. It's harmony - the same pattern but in many instrumentations - that's a plus, but still to little changes in harmony. Like other say - it's perfect for a fable game, but for a song you need to add more patterns. Overall GREAT JOB!! :D I wish you good luck in you career.
Cheers
Martin

P.S. For sure I will use it on RPG session with my friends ;)

wyldfyre1 responds:

If you only knew how many patterns we had in this to begin with LOL. Trust me there's a lot more to this the more you listen the more i'm sure you'll hear. Anyway thanks for the review hah.

[The Quiet Fields]

For me too simple...

7/10 for the idea and harmony - it's original. But this is some kind of ambient music - can fit in a movie scene or game, but for listening - kinda tiring.

MarkySpark responds:

Yes my friend, it is meant to be short sweet and simple. Thanks for listening.

[.:Steady:.]

It's going and going and going and nothing more...

I'm sorry, but this song is very, very boring. In the beginning everything is all right. I'm waiting for something, but it repeat again. You've repeated this harmony for about 30 times, so every change in the melody doesn't change anything. You need to work on lot of things, like harmony, melody and form. I hope you will take my advices seriously. 3/10 because it's your first piece for piano. Good luck with music!

DudeSkimmy responds:

Alright, thanks for the review

[.prickly porcupine.]

Great :)

This fits perfectly to the game :) I like your work :D

VegetarianMeat responds:

Thanks :D

[Never Forget(Halo3)]

Bravo! :D

I've never listened to Halo game song. But this is very nice. I like and it makes me feel relaxed. Nice job! :D 10/10, 5/5

TerraNation responds:

Thanks alot :)

[The Night I Left Paris]

Everything the same...

Ok. The first thing you should know is that your music is boring. I'm sory to say bad words, but I want you to be better. Melody is good, I'm happy that there is a melody, 'cause many compositions hasn't got it. However, melody isn't everything. You've tried to make some accompaniment, but it's boring. It's like there's something missing. As the man below said add more instruments, make some chords and harmony. And try to change it a little bit, not only repeat it. This is my piece of advice.

NumberOneChina666 responds:

I had a feeling it was kinda empty and missing things. I thought it was a pretty good melody as well. But it was meant to be empty. Anyways i'll fix up the song.

THANX

KS666

[The Last Preparations]

Hmm... Classical?

I definitely agree with friend below. This could be a song in Terminator. But this is not classical! And the intro is a little bit too long. That's my opinion.

DigohD responds:

I could just not find a suiting genre, I agree it is not classical. but there were no suiting genre to choose either :P

[The Wind]

OK :)

F major :) Can you use some other key? It fits to some movie :) Try to make a one big song from the whole album and send it to some director. This is good for the intro :) Nice job :D

Bak-R responds:

My goal it's to make movie song ^^. Yes i can use other key. I will. ^^ don't be afraid. I just think it was a good idea to make an album with the same key. People could see that with the same key their is a lot of song.

I work of more song orchestral to learn a lot of new ability to compose several new song ^^.

Thanks for your comment. ;)